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Bodies held together like Pangaea
shaking, trembling, turning,
continental drifts,
the translation of foreign emotions,
and days spent speaking in tongues
on latin skin.
Credit to this lovely song for the title:


www.youtube.com/watch?v=zDab4h…
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:iconlyricana:
I really like the language you used here to convey your idea.  Despite the short length there's a lot of depth!
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:iconbluesoulgreenmind:
Thank you. I was describing what love means to me  by the act of making love. So its a deeply personal poem.
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:iconlyricana:
Using such few words to show such a large and detailed picture- it's definitely DD worthy in my book.  
Sometime when it isn't so late over here I'll look through the rest of your gallery too~
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:iconbluesoulgreenmind:
Please do. Some of my other pieces need reworking but I'd like that. :) Have a good night.
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day and Happy Holidays! :santa:
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:iconbluesoulgreenmind:
Thank you! Have a beautiful day yourself.
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure, thank you :happybounce:
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AbbyMeyer Dec 27, 2013
I adore that first line particularly. :)
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:iconbluesoulgreenmind:
Thanks! Im glad you do. :D
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LostGryphin Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautifully written! Congrats on the DD.
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